Wednesday, March 07, 2007

angel's fate

siting in front of fate
wishes are great
and dreams are nightmares
when angels wait for some thing great
but how can one know what is fate
are wishes, what will be answered
or dreams that will become real
siting here deciding fate
a wish for the angel's help, a sign
that i cry for a look of the angel
and those eyes of an angel with a look of love
and i sit here looking in those eyes
wishing for time to never go by
i now wait that time of fate where
i find out my fate, and my place
i cry out to you oh angel of mine
today should be the day let me and test me
never crying angel why should we wait
though time it is harder and filled with pain grows larger
i count the seconds and the minuets i wait
i know that time is not limited
but i can not wait no longer, i cry for help
oh lord who sends this angel, answer my calls
i don't know what i shall do with my time
only sit here waiting, the wish, the dream
just the answer of fate, and if i see
that time arrives i will not hesitate
its been so long for me to wait
but until that time i will wait

1 Comments:

Blogger sOoS said...

hi kfh king

i dont kno if those feelings inside what u wrote are real and inside u too, if they r not inside u then u r so good to create such feelings and make them real to us, but if they r real then i advise to stop waiting and tell ur angel that she has a place inside ur heart cuz today will never come back again so take the chance and dont waste the time ;)

i wanna say that u have a good way in writing but try to stop repeating the same word too mcuh, i think that it weaks the thing.

good luck kfh king
waiting for ur new.

7:27 PM  

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